Monday, 3 December 2012

Individual Storyline

Individual Storyline Idea

The film starts out with am extreme close up of the male character's closed eye. Whilst this is going on there are quick cut shots of strange happenings like fights, screams and shots of the rest of the characters running all from the shot of either POV or long shot. The pace of these shots gets a lot quicker, builds up in sounds of white noise and then it cuts off, the shot is then silent, flicking back to the eye, which then opens and stares into the camera.
We then see a 2 girls, sat outside on a door step outside a house, with big bags made for camping or a journey. They are deeply conversing when the topic of conversation switches to the 3rd girl that we haven't met as of yet. Girl 1 makes the point that she doesn't really know the girl but she does seem nice. Although she is a tad odd and tends to stare at her quite weirdly. Girl 2 laughs and reminds the other girl that she doesn't know her like she does, and reveals to the audience that she was her best friend when they were growing up, she did have a weird family, especially her brother but they were never horrid to her. Girl 1 agrees that she'll be nice to her, but she still thinks there's something weird about her, a car horn then sounds. We then cut to a shot of the car pulling up, and the third girl opens the passenger door and waves at them to come and get in the car. Girl 1 looks over at Girl 2 as they pick up their bags and mouths to her "Is that her mum?" To which Girl 2 replies with a nod and whispers "She is a bit weird, but be nice" The girls put their bags in the boot and get in the back seat of the car. The girls both greet girl 3 and her mother. The mother smiles politely, but her full face is never revealed and looks at the girls shiftily in the rear view mirror. To which girl 1 and 2 look at each other and shyly snigger. They arrive at the edge of a woods after a journey of a while. They get out of the car and thank the mother, she doesn't reply. After the 3rd girl gets out of the car, the mother drives off quickly without saying goodbye.
The shot cuts later when the girls are in the woods and the girls have found a place to which they have set up 2 tents, and attempted to make a small camp fire that is providing most of the light as it is getting later. Girl 2 goes off to find more twigs for the fire and looks at Girl 1 to hint to speak to her. Girl 1 tries to make conversation and asks about Girl 3's family, to which she angers her resulting in her shouting and throwing her soup all over the floor and storming away leaving Girl 1 alone. Girl 2, whilst the third girl is missing, starts to hear noises and breathing around her and runs back to the camp. She gets back to the camp and doesn't mention anything to Girl 1 at the camp. She then asks about the other girl and tells Girl 1 to go and look for her. She does this and finds a little shack with lights on in it, thinking she might be in there. You hear footsteps coming towards her and then her slightly scream and it goes off.

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